Category: Historical Fiction

The Clan of the Cave Bear by Jean M. Auel

The Clan of the Cave Bear by Jean M. Auel

(Cover picture courtesy of Bookworld.)

This novel of awesome beauty and power is a moving saga about people, relationships, and the boundaries of love.  Through Jean M. Auel’s magnificent storytelling we are taken back to the dawn of modern humans, and with a girl named Ayla we are swept up in the harsh and beautiful Ice Age world they shared with the ones who called themselves the Clan of the Cave Bear.

A natural disaster leaves the young girl wandering alone in an unfamiliar and dangerous land until she is found by a woman of the Clan, people very different from her own kind.  To them, blond, blue-eyed Ayla looks peculiar and ugly—she is one of the Others, those who have moved intot their ancient homeland; but Iza cannot leave the girl to die and takes her with them.

Iza and Creb, the old Mog-ur, grow to love her, and as Ayla learns the ways of the Clan and Iza’s way of healing, most come to accept her.  But the brutal and proud youth who is destined to become their next leader sees her differences as a threat to his authority.  He develops a deep and abiding hatred for the strange girl of the Others who lives in their midst, and is determined to get his revenge.

It’s often difficult to sum up one’s feelings for a book in one sentence, but I’ll try:

The Clan of the Cave Bear is a decent enough book that tried too hard to jump into the category of ‘epic novel’.

What I mean by that is that I enjoyed learning about a wildly different time in history than I’m accustomed to, but some of Jean M. Auel’s writing was distracting.  The whole purpose of her Earth’s Children series is tell the story of humankind from its earliest days when the Neanderthals began to die out or breed with Cro-Magnons, modern humans.  The main character, Ayla, is adopted into the Neanderthal Clan after being orphaned in an earthquake, creating the perfect situation to show readers the decline of Neanderthals and the rise of modern man.

In The Clan of the Cave Bear we get marvelous insight into the culture and day to day activities of our ancestors, which makes for a fascinating historical novel.  However, sometimes Auel veers into what I call Professor Mode and starts explaining things instead of showing them from the characters’ points of view and letting the reader figure things out.  Here is one such passage:

“Wooden bowls were used in similar ways.  Rib bones were stirrers, large flat pelvic bones were plate and platters along with thin sections of logs.  Birch-bark glued together with balsam gum, some reinforced with a well-placed knot of sinew, were folded into shapes for many uses.” (Pg. 81)

I don’t know about you, but that sounds a heck of a lot like my fourth-grade history textbook’s description of how the parts of buffalo were used.  In historical fiction there is a fine line between giving enough information so your readers can understand what the story is about and giving a lecture.  There are times when Jean M. Auel shows us what life in the Clan is like, but there are others similar to the above passage that lecture us.

With that said, for the most part I enjoyed The Clan of the Cave Bear.  It’s well written and although Ayla is an interesting character, the book is more about the changing times than the characters.  Fair enough; it comes close to an ‘epic saga’, but I don’t think it ever really achieves that.  But what it does accomplish quite well is to show why the Neanderthals as a separate species died out: they could not change.  Their culture and traditions were so ingrained that they resisted change; their brains were larger but not as readily adaptable as the brains of our ancestors.  And for that alone, I’ll be continuing the Earth’s Children® series.  (Yes, Ms. Auel actually trademarked the name of her series.)

I give this book 3.5/5 stars.

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The Journey by John Heldt

The Journey by John Heldt(Cover picture courtesy of Literary Inklings.)

Seattle, 2010. When her entrepreneur husband dies in an accident, Michelle Preston Richardson, 48, finds herself childless and directionless. She yearns for the simpler days of her youth, before she followed her high school sweetheart down a road that led to limitless riches but little fulfillment, and jumps at a chance to reconnect with her past at a class reunion. But when Michelle returns to Unionville, Oregon, and joins three classmates on a spur-of-the-moment tour of an abandoned mansion, she gets more than she asked for. She enters a mysterious room and is thrown back to 1979.

Distraught and destitute, Michelle finds a job as a secretary at Unionville High, where she guides her spirited younger self, Shelly Preston, and childhood friends through their tumultuous senior year. Along the way, she meets widowed teacher Robert Land and finds the love and happiness she had always sought. But that happiness is threatened when history intervenes and Michelle must act quickly to save those she loves from deadly fates. Filled with humor and heartbreak, THE JOURNEY gives new meaning to friendship, courage, and commitment as it follows an unfulfilled soul through her second shot at life.

[Full disclosure: John Heldt sent me a free ebook of The Journey in return for an honest review.]

First, let me say how dare he!  How dare John Heldt make me cry again!

Okay, that was a little bit melodramatic.  Yes, The Journey made me cry just like the first book in his Northwest Passage trilogy, The Mine.  I won’t tell you whether they were tears of happiness or sadness, but let me just say that it’s a very good sign when I’m so emotionally involved in a book that I show emotion reading it.  The best part about The Journey?  If you want to cry as well, you don’t have to read The Mine for it to make sense because the two stories are only connected by their time travel premises (so far).

In the beginning when Michelle travelled back in time to 1979 in the town where her younger self is a teenager, I kept thinking John Heldt had gotten himself into a mess.  Would Michelle reach out to her younger self and try to change the past?  What about the grandfather paradox?  (If I kill grandpa before he has my father/mother, will I cease to exist?  It’s the same principle with any manipulation of the past.)  But the ending, oh the ending!  John Heldt wrapped everything up brilliantly in a way that makes you both sad and hopeful.

Michelle as a character takes some warming up to, but you’ll absolutely love her by the end of the novel.  As for Shelly Preston, Michelle’s younger self, you’ll love her immediately.  The Journey is told from both of their points of view, which I absolutely love because you get to see the effect on has on the other and vice versa.  I can’t tell you much about their relationship otherwise it would spoil things, but they make each other better people.

With a fast plot that made me hog the computer for nearly two hours, amazing characters and a tear-jerker ending, you can’t go wrong with The Journey.  And at 99 cents at the Kindle Store, it’s a complete steal.  It’s worth twenty times that, trust me.

I give this book 5/5 stars.

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Lady of Palenque: Flower of Bacal by Anna Kirwan

Lady of Palenque by Anna Kirwan(Cover picture courtesy of Examiner.com.)

9.15.18.2.11 9 Chuen 14 Mol (July 7)

Lakamha, Bacal Highland

I thought, now that I leave Lakamha, I may never return.  I may never see my family again.  Well, perhaps I will see some of them.  But I will be like the water that comes down from a spring deep in the heart of a mountain cavern.  It can flow and seep and pool and cascade all the way down to the water lily fields, all the way down to the big river, all the way to the marshes and the great salt sea….

But it can never flow back uphill to its home.

I will never forget Lakamha, even if Lakamha forgets me.

All I really have to say is meh.  Lady of Palenque was a book that had so much potential that was unrealized; I should have loved it.  I have visited 3 different Mayan cities, two of which are mentioned in the book and was fascinated by even the little bit of history I learned while there.  So when I saw that Lady of Palenque was written in the point of view of a Mayan princess, I practically jumped with joy.  Here was a great opportunity to learn more about the Classical Mayan Period and their culture!

Um, not really.  Sure, I learned a few things, but Anna Kirwan didn’t really seem to know how to explain all of the exotic customs and items from daily life to readers.  It seems like she just assumed readers would know about these things.  Well, no.  Despite the Mayan Doomsday scare of 2012 perpetuated by an idiotic media, not much is actually known about the Mayan culture in the mainstream.  Even someone like me who has visited multiple Mayan sites really has next to no background in their history in the relative scheme of things.  So I didn’t really learn as much as I did from other books in The Royal Diaries.

Part of the problem was the names.  Oh my word, the names!  When the main character introduces herself as ShahnaK’in Yaxchel Pacal, Princess Green Jay on the Wall, you know things are going to be complicated.  And that really isn’t the Lady of Palenque’s name because Anna Kirwan had to make up her personal name.  Her real name was “Chac Nik Ye, Yax Ahau Xoc”.  Now, I’m a huge advocate for being as realistic as possible in historical fiction, but with all of the insanely long, complicated names (to a Westerner with a frankly pathetic background in language) I had a hard time following the story itself.  As far as I can tell, it mostly features the thirteen-year-old Lady travelling to her husband-to-be in Xukpi.

There has to be a better way to keep the names straight without completely dumbing down the book, right?  Right?!

I give this book 2/5 stars.

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Prophecy of the Sisters by Michelle Zink

Prophecy of the Sisters by Michelle Zink(Cover picture courtesy of Michelle Zink’s website.)

An ancient prophecy divides two sisters—one good…one evil…Who will prevail?

Twin sisters Lia and Alice Milthorpe have just become orphans.  They have also become enemies.  As they discover their roles in a prophecy that has turned generations of sisters against each other, they find themselves entangled in a mystery that involves a tattoo-like mark, their parents’ deaths, a boy, a book, and a lifetime of secrets.

Lia and Alice don’t know whom they can trust.  They just know they can’t trust each other.

This book had everything possible going for it: an unique premise, mystery, decent enough world building…I should have loved it.  But “should have” does not mean “did”.

I just could not connect with any of the characters, especially Lia.  Lia is someone I should have connected with not only because the book is written in first person, but because Michelle Zink has made her a consistent, normally likable sort of character.  But I just could not connect to her on an emotional level.  I did not really feel her grief at her father’s death, her burning curiosity to learn more about the mysterious mark on her arm, her happiness with her friends…it just didn’t ring true.  It felt like it was superficial, shallow, that something was missing.  I don’t know if this was just me or it was the very pared down writing style, but I could not connect with Lia and since the book is in first person POV, that tends to make it more difficult to like.

Aside from the lack of emotion in Michelle Zink’s writing I was quite impressed with her world-building and the premise of the book.  Prophecies are kind of old, but I love how she adds her own twist to it by making not everything as it seems.  The idea that Satan (or Samael as he’s called in this book) wants to return to Earth to unleash the 7 plagues signalling the end of time is not all that new, but the way Zink handled it was.  The Spiritual Plane, the different levels of the spirit world, the ‘keys’ to the prophecy being actual people…it was all very fascinating.  Sure, I would have appreciated more information in the beginning rather than having massive info-dumps and needless exposition in dialogue, but you can’t have everything.

The plot was fast-paced to the point of being rushed in some places, but it did have lots of twists and turns to keep the reader interested.  The cliffhanger at the end is great, but I don’t know if I really want to continue the series yet.  But who knows?

I give this book 3/5 stars.

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Claudius the God by Robert Graves

Claudius the God by Robert Graves(Cover picture courtesy of 10Thirty.)

Claudius has survived the murderous intrigues of his predecessors to become, reluctantly, Emperor of Rome.  Here he recounts his surprisingly successful reign: how he cultivates the loyalty of the army and the common people to repair the damage caused by Caligula; his relations with the Jewish King Herod Agrippa; and his invasion of Britain.  But the growing paranoia of absolute power and the infidelity of his promiscuous young wife, Messalina, mean that his good fortunate will not last for ever.  In this second part of his fictionalized autobiography Claudius—wry, rueful, always inquisitive—brings to life some of the most scandalous and violent times in history.

To be perfectly honest, until I finished I, Claudius I had no idea there actually was a sequel.  The first book has definitely overshadowed its own sequel, which does tend to happen to classic books.  I was lucky to even find a copy in the bookstore, which I took despite absolutely hating the cover.  Whoever designed it goes by the maxim ‘sex sells’, you can be sure of that.  But I digress.

In some ways I enjoyed Claudius the God more than I, Claudius.  One thing I really did like was that poor Claudius finally does get to be the good emperor we all know he would be.  In fiction I can be a sucker for tragedy, so the inevitably of his death upped the tension for me and since Robert Graves wrote this as a memoir, we have Claudius dropping little hints about his fate.  This is especially true when he talks of how much he was in love with Messalina and didn’t discover her betrayals until much, much later.  Thus the subtitle “and his wife Messalina” in some editions of the book.

At the same time, I wasn’t as emotionally invested in Claudius the God as I was in the first book.  Perhaps it was Claudius’ eventual change from idealist who wants to restore the Republic to cynical Emperor who does not fight fate when it comes to Nero taking the throne after him.  Of course Graves had to stick to history, but I would have liked to see Claudius care a little more about what would happen after he died.  His friendship with Herod Agrippa was interesting and certainly played a huge part in the story, but I also felt it got more page time than it should have.  The backstory on Herod was absolutely necessary, but it did slow the action to a crawl for the first part of the book.

I had a hard time getting through parts like the Herod backstory, but Robert Graves more than made up for it in the sheer attention to detail.  We learn so much about Roman life and get a sense of how the Romans really viewed the world around them, including their conquered territories and provinces.  The interactions between the different power players of the day (Vitellius, Messalina, Narcissus, Agrippinilla and many more) were pretty much the best part of the book.  And you can’t help but love poor Claudius, despite his flaws.

I give this book 4/5 stars.

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