What Makes a Good Dystopia?

I know, I know.  ‘Good dystopia’ is an oxymoron, but I think you know what I mean.  Dystopias, ever since the release of The Hunger Games, have exploded in popularity both in the teen and adult markets.  There are a lot of good ones out there, but there are a lot of bad ones too.  But what makes a dystopia good (read: interesting) for the reader?

Believability

1.  It has to be believable.

Many of you know my gripe about how the faction system in the Divergent trilogy would never, ever work because people are not like that.  If dystopian fiction doesn’t have a dystopia that makes sense or could really happen someday, readers are not going to like it.  Authors have to know enough about human nature and world politics in order to create dystopias that could really happen.  Sadly, a lot of authors just seem to skip this general knowledge requirement and jump in head first.

Why was Orwell’s 1984 so popular?  Because it really could happen.  It drew elements from the society of the day and predicted some things that are going on to this day.  Compare that to Divergent, where there are 5 factions that you pretty much have to join and fit completely into one category unless you’re Divergent.  Most people in Veronica Roth’s world are not Divergent, which tells you how much she really knows about human nature. Continue reading

Insurgent by Veronica Roth

Insurgent by Veronica Roth(Cover picture courtesy of Veronica Roth’s blog.)

One choice can transform you–or it can destroy you. But every choice has consequences, and as unrest surges in the factions all around her, Tris Prior must continue trying to save those she loves–and herself–while grappling with haunting questions of grief and forgiveness, identity and loyalty, politics and love.

Tris’s initiation day should have been marked by celebration and victory with her chosen faction; instead, the day ended with unspeakable horrors. War now looms as conflict between the factions and their ideologies grows. And in times of war, sides must be chosen, secrets will emerge, and choices will become even more irrevocable–and even more powerful. Transformed by her own decisions but also by haunting grief and guilt, radical new discoveries, and shifting relationships, Tris must fully embrace her Divergence, even if she does not know what she may lose by doing so.

New York Times bestselling author Veronica Roth’s much-anticipated second book of the dystopian Divergent series is another intoxicating thrill ride of a story, rich with hallmark twists, heartbreaks, romance, and powerful insights about human nature.

Somehow I think I won’t be reading anything by Veronica Roth after reading Insurgent.  Tris, who was quite a strong character in Divergent, has turned into a damsel in distress and the explanation for why factions were created was half-assed at best.  (I know, I hate swearing too, but there is no other way to describe the ‘explanation’ we are given.)

Tris has, to put it quite plainly, has turned into a wimp.  She does not do many proactive things in the course of Insurgent, but seems to react to everything.  To be fair, there was not much action in the novel except near the end, so it was hard for her to actually showcase her strength, but still.  Tris lets Tobias (Four) boss her around, goes into the Erudite trap despite the fact that going there will kill even more people than if she didn’t and is just as judgmental, if not more, than in Divergent.  All Erudites are completely evil, cold, calculating pathetic excuses for human beings, we get it already!  At least she begins to change her attitude at the very end, but it’s too late for redemption.

Before I read Insurgent, some people had told me it explained and went more into depth about why the factions were created.  And there is an explanation: on the last two pages!  It’s a pathetic explanation as well, as if Veronica Roth just shoved it in the end to keep her fans from tearing her to shreds.  I still don’t buy the explanation that factions are great things to prevent the moral breakdown of society and that the Divergent are the key (because they’re oh-so-special) to bringing society back to normal.  Veronica Roth is completely wrong in assuming that most people can be conveniently placed into 5 basic categories.  If the faction system actually occurred, nearly everyone would be Divergent because our personalities are not as simple as Roth would like to pretend.

I wish there had been more reminders of what happened in Divergent because there are so many names and events to remember.  But Veronica Roth barely drops any hints and just assumes readers will be able to immediately jump back into the story.  There’s a fine line between too much backstory and not enough and Insurgent falls drastically on the latter side.  I only read Divergent in July, but had to actually look up the Wikipedia summary to find out who the heck half of the characters were.  Despite that, the writing itself was not bad and when there was actually action, there was a great balance between description and dialogue.  But a good writing style can’t make up for all the offenses Insurgent was guilty of.

I give this book 2/5 stars.

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Spotlight: The Elite by Kiera Cass

The Elite by Kiera Cass
Thirty-five girls came to the palace to compete in the Selection. All but six have been sent home. And only one will get to marry Prince Maxon and be crowned princess of Illea.

America still isn’t sure where her heart lies. When she’s with Maxon, she’s swept up in their new and breathless romance, and can’t dream of being with anyone else. But whenever she sees Aspen standing guard around the palace, and is overcome with memories of the life they planned to share. With the group narrowed down to the Elite, the other girls are even more determined to win Maxon over—and time is running out for America to decide.

Just when America is sure she’s made her choice, a devastating loss makes her question everything again. And while she’s struggling to imagine her future, the violent rebels that are determined to overthrow the monarchy are growing stronger and their plans could destroy her chance at any kind of happy ending.

No, this is not a review.  This will be my new Saturday feature called ‘Spotlight’ in which I highlight either a book I really, really enjoyed or a book I can’t wait to come out.  The Elite by Kiera Cass is the latter.  As you’ll recall I had issues with the abundance of clichés when it came to the girls in The Selection, but overall it was an enjoyable book.

The reason I’m anticipating The Elite is not only to see who is chosen, but because the mysterious rebels seem to be playing a bigger part (finally!).  Who are the rebels?  Are they justified in taking down the monarchy?  (Probably.)  What happened in America to bring them into a very strict class system?  Hopefully at least some of these questions are answered in The Elite.

The Elite releases on April 23, 2013.

Posting for 20four12

Today it’s my turn to guest post for Caleb over at 20four12, so I reviewed Empty by Suzanne Weyn.  Have you ever read a book that had an amazing premise and just fell flat on its face?  Well, then you’ll be able to sympathize with my reading experience.  To see the great premise in question, head on over to 20four12!  And while you’re over there, you should check out Caleb’s other reviews and add some more books to your science fiction lists.