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For the past two months, Kitty Doe’s life has been a lie. Forced to impersonate the Prime Minister’s niece, her frustration grows as her trust in her fake fiancé cracks, her real boyfriend is forbidden and the Blackcoats keep her in the dark more than ever.

But in the midst of discovering that her role in the Hart family may not be as coincidental as she thought, she’s accused of treason and is forced to face her greatest fear: Elsewhere. A prison where no one can escape.

As one shocking revelation leads to the next, Kitty learns the hard way that she can trust no one, not even the people she thought were on her side. With her back against the wall, Kitty wants to believe she’ll do whatever it takes to support the rebellion she believes in—but is she prepared to pay the ultimate price?

[Full disclosure: I requested and received a free ebook through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.]

I just have one question after reading this entire book: Did Kitty lose her brain in between books one and two?!

I just have no words.  I actually liked Kitty in the first book because although she was naive and kind of innocent, at least she generally knew when to keep her mouth shut and keep up the charade of being Lila Hart.  In all honesty I can’t say I was her biggest fan ever in the first book, but she really grew on me and at least most of her actions were justified by logic.

But in Captive, that all goes out the window.  Kitty seems to have lost her brain, particularly in the first half of the novel.  She spouts off her mouth at the people who have power over her, she doesn’t know when to shut up and let Knox do his rebellion thing and even though there’s no reason for it other than to advance the plot, she reveals one of the secrets she could have used as leverage later on.  So where does she wind up?  Elsewhere, of course!  No one, not even Lila Hart’s replacement is irreplaceable.  And when she’s in Elsewhere, she promptly makes an enemy of every single person around her because she just won’t shut up.  Ever.  I spent most of the book wanting to slap her for being so incredibly stupid.

As for the plot, unlike in the first book it didn’t really feel like there was anything really all that new.  Aimeé Carter has always used some tried and true clichés but in Captive she just lets it all hang out.  There were no surprises because the whole plot of this book was like a soap opera, with mysterious lost family members and lovers betrayed—the whole nine yards.  Captive suffers from a severe case of Book Two Syndrome in that practically nothing happens until a little bit at the end of the book to make you go buy the third book.  After the plot twists and turns of Pawn, it was just supremely disappointing.

The world-building was really the only thing I didn’t actively dislike.  I like that we saw the other side of Elsewhere, not just the ‘shoot people for sport’ side.  It’s run like a prisoner of war camp (which it sort of is) and life within is pretty much just as brutal as you’d expect from a dictatorial regime.  Nothing really surprising, but nothing so stereotypical that I wanted to throw my Kindle at the wall.  The only thing that I was happy about was that we got to see another side of the rebels as well as see how ordinary people can end up in Elsewhere.  Sure, you have your criminals and political dissidents, but you also have some pretty harmless teenagers and kids whose only crime was being born—or more accurately, not being born rich.

As someone who enjoyed Pawn, Captive really was a huge disappointment.  I liked that we got to see more of Kitty’s world but I just hated that it was in such a forced way.  It seemed like Carter wanted to showcase the rest of the world so she dumbed down Kitty in an attempt to force that showcase.  Will I still read the last book, Queen?  Yes, I think I will because despite this huge disappointment, I did enjoy the first book and I’m enjoying the overall plot arc.  But really Aimeé Carter, you can do better than this.

I give this book 1.5/5 stars.

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