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Daughter of the Gods by Stephanie Thornton

Daughter of the Gods by Stephanie Thornton(Cover picture courtesy of Stephanie Thornton’s website.)

Egypt, 1400s BC. The pharaoh’s pampered second daughter, lively, intelligent Hatshepsut, delights in racing her chariot through the marketplace and testing her archery skills in the Nile’s marshlands. But the death of her elder sister, Neferubity, in a gruesome accident arising from Hatshepsut’s games forces her to confront her guilt…and sets her on a profoundly changed course.

Hatshepsut enters a loveless marriage with her half brother, Thut, to secure his claim to the Horus Throne and produce a male heir. But it is another of Thut’s wives, the commoner Aset, who bears him a son, while Hatshepsut develops a searing attraction for his brilliant adviser Senenmut. And when Thut suddenly dies, Hatshepsut becomes de facto ruler, as regent to her two-year-old nephew.

Once, Hatshepsut anticipated being free to live and love as she chose. Now she must put Egypt first. Ever daring, she will lead a vast army and build great temples, but always she will be torn between the demands of leadership and the desires of her heart. And even as she makes her boldest move of all, her enemies will plot her downfall….

[Full disclosure: I received a free ebook through NetGalley for the blog tour in exchange for an honest review.]

There are very few books that literally take my breath away when I finish reading them but Daughter of the Gods is one of them.

One of the things that struck me most about this book was Stephanie Thornton’s amazing writing style.  She can do the big dramatic scenes without making them seem forced.  She can also slow down and describe things so the reader truly feels like they’re transported back in time.  And most importantly of all, she can actually hold the reader’s attention for nearly 500 pages because she slowly builds up tension throughout the novel.  It’s not the fastest-paced novel ever but her writing is so compelling that you won’t want to put it down.

Stephanie Thornton’s portrayal of Hatshepsut is pretty much how I imagined the real person.  She’s strong and willful but fiercely devoted to her people and preserving the welfare of Egypt even at a cost to herself.  Her love for Senenmut develops slowly but once she realizes she loves him she does so with all of her heart.  Senenmut himself is also an interesting character, but Hatshepsut tends to steal the scene for most of the novel.  Of course she can be stubborn on occasion and her stubbornness costs her dearly sometimes, but that flaw only makes her more human.  Hatshepsut is a character even modern readers can relate with despite the huge cultural differences like the fact she marries her half-brother and worships many different gods and goddesses.

We don’t know much about Hatshepsut’s reign because her monuments and writings were destroyed in a systematic campaign to squash the idea that a woman could ever be Pharaoh.  But where the facts are known, Stephanie Thornton generally sticks to them and fills in the gaps in our knowledge of her reign with believable events.  Even when she does deviate from the historical record (which was rare) she is able to justify it within the context of the story as well as in her historical note.  The changes she made were to improve the story and that’s why Daughter of the Gods is now one of my favourite historical fiction novels.

Even if you’re not a huge fan of ancient Egypt, I can’t recommend Daughter of the Gods enough.  Stephanie Thornton is able to bring ancient Egypt to life for novices and experts alike.  You’ll fall in love with her characters and experience their triumphs and heartaches right alongside them.  And you definitely won’t be able to put the book down.

Seriously, just go buy this book.

I give this book 5/5 stars.

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The Recruit by Fiona Palmer

The Recruit by Fiona Palmer(Cover picture courtesy of NetGalley.)

From one of Australia’s Queens of Romance comes the debut in a brand new YA series about secrets, strengths, and what lies beneath the surface.

Jasmine Thomas may not be completely normal, but she’s a pretty typical seventeen-year-old girl. She hates the rich mean kids, loves her best friends, and can’t wait to get out of school each day. Her spare time is spent at The Ring — a boxing gym where she practically grew up — learning karate, boxing and street fighting. So, yeah, Jaz can kick some major butt.

Life seems pretty normal until the day Ryan Fletcher enters her gym…mysterious and hot with heaps of bad boy charm. Sure, she checks him out. Who wouldn’t? But what doesn’t show on his gorgeous abs are secrets and lies that dominate his very grown-up world. Now Jaz has to figure out just how far she is willing to go to know more. Could Ryan really be offering the life-fulfilling life path she’s always dreamed of?

[Full disclosure: I was approached by the publisher and accepted a free ebook through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.]

I have to be honest here when I say that contemporary YA romance is generally not my thing.  It never really has been and likely never will, but with books like The Recruit I’m always willing to try.  So that’s why I accepted the invitation to read and review Fiona Palmer’s newest release.

I was both pleasantly surprised and slightly disappointed by The Recruit. On one hand, I was surprised that the romance element was actually somewhat realistic and that the heroine was well fleshed-out.  On the other hand, it was disappointing that I could predict almost every supposed plot twist throughout the whole novel.  First I’ll talk about the characters.

Jaz isn’t your typical teenage girl.  She likes to kick butt and is actually very good at it.  Normally this would be a Mary Sue alert, but who wouldn’t be good when they’ve spent their whole childhood learning how to fight?  It’s a realistic progression in that way and it makes Jaz a very interesting character.  She grows throughout the book, both in her love of Ryan and in her personal life.  Jaz isn’t sure about life after school but I like how she takes her time to come to her own decision and doesn’t feel pressured to do one thing or the other.  Ryan, the secret agent, is an okay character.  He’s pretty much your typical tortured secret agent but he does have some other qualities that make him a three dimensional character.

The main disappointment for me was the lack of surprises in the plot.  Pretty much everything was hinted at so obviously that you could see the next plot twist coming a mile away.  Another thing I didn’t like was that the plot follows such a typical character arc for this type of novel.  There was nothing new or innovative about the whole thing; most tropes were simply played straight.  The characters are typical of such a novel as well but they were three dimensional so I didn’t mind that aspect.  No, what disappointed me was the predictability of the plot.

Basically, this was an okay book for me.  I would recommend it to some of my friends, but I certainly can’t offer a blanket recommendation for everyone.  Basically, if you like contemporary YA that’s heavy on the romance you’ll probably like The Recruit.  It just wasn’t the best book for me.

I give this book 3.5/5 stars.

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My Interview with John Heldt (3)

John HeldtJohn Heldt is the author of the now-finished Northwest Passage series (The Mine, The Journey, The Show, The Fire and The Mirror).  This five-book series was his writing debut and they all focus on time travel and romance during some very exciting times in American history.  Read on to see our discussion about men writing from women’s points of view, saying goodbye to a series and what he would do differently now that’s he’s finished the series.

 

1. You’ve lived and breathed the Northwest Passage series for years. What’s it like to say goodbye to the series?

Like other authors who have parted with a series, I have mixed emotions. I’m excited about starting a new series but sad to see this one go. I grew attached to the characters and their stories and believe I could have done more with them. One of the things I enjoyed most about writing The Show and The Mirror, in particular, is that I was able to build on a previous book. I look forward to doing more of the same in future series.

2. Of all of the times you could have set The Mirror, why did you specifically choose 1964?

I chose 1964 because it offered opportunities that other years did not. Like 1941 in The Mine, it was a transitional year that was firmly rooted in two distinctly different decades.
Though music, fashion, and cars from the late fifties were everywhere, so were signs of coming change – particularly social change. With a presidential election, the Gulf of Tonkin incident, the Civil Rights Act, the Mississippi Burning tragedy, and the Beatles’ first North American tour, the year was also historically significant.

3. In the series you decided never to go into the nitty-gritty scientific explanation for time travel. Why?

Writing novels involves making choices, setting priorities, and acknowledging limits.

I decided at the start I would treat time travel as fantasy, rather than science fiction, because I wanted to put the focus on people and not machines. The thing I liked best about the Back to the Future series was not the DeLorean or the flux capacitor but rather how Marty McFly interacted with his ancestors. I wanted readers to see themselves not as scientists who volunteered for a highly technical time-travel mission but rather ordinary people who involuntarily traveled back in time by stepping into the wrong gold mine or restroom or haunted house.

4. Three out of five of the books you wrote have predominantly female viewpoints.
As a male writer, was it challenging for you to write from a female POV? What was
challenging about it?

For the most part, it wasn’t challenging at all. I grew up with sisters and female friends. I have a wife and two daughters, including one who is the same age as the twins in The Mirror. I’ve known strong, articulate, and resourceful women my whole life. Writing about such women in the Northwest Passage series was relatively easy. That said, I made a point of enlisting the help of several women in preparing each of the novels. Their assistance in making sure I got things right was invaluable.

5. Can you give us a hint about any future writing projects you’re taking on?

I have already started work on the next project, a five-book series of time-travel novels that will be structured much like the Northwest Passage series. My protagonists will interact with their ancestors in the not-so-distant past of twentieth-century America. The difference is that the protagonists in the new series will pass through a common time portal and travel beyond the Pacific Northwest.

6. Looking back on the series, was there anything you would have done differently either writing-wise or marketing-wise?

Yes. I would have written The Mine, The Show, and The Mirror as a trilogy and written
The Journey and The Fire as a separate series. I would have also paid more attention to point of view and description issues in the early books and perhaps made better use of advertising options in the first year. For the most part, however, I would have done things exactly the same. It’s been fun.

Onyx by Jennifer L. Armentrout

Onyx by Jennifer L. Armentrout(Cover picture courtesy of Jennifer L. Armentrout’s site.)

Being connected to Daemon Black sucks…

Thanks to his alien mojo, Daemon’s determined to prove what he feels for me is more than a product of our bizarro connection. So I’ve sworn him off, even though he’s running more hot than cold these days. But we’ve got bigger problems.

Something worse than the Arum has come to town…

The Department of Defense are here. If they ever find out what Daemon can do and that we’re linked, I’m a goner. So is he. And there’s this new boy in school who’s got a secret of his own. He knows what’s happened to me and he can help, but to do so, I have to lie to Daemon and stay away from him. Like that’s possible. Against all common sense, I’m falling for Daemon. Hard.

But then everything changes…

I’ve seen someone who shouldn’t be alive. And I have to tell Daemon, even though I know he’s never going to stop searching until he gets the truth. What happened to his brother? Who betrayed him? And what does the DOD want from them—from me?

No one is who they seem. And not everyone will survive the lies…

I have a confession to make.  This series is pretty much guilty pleasure for me.  It follows the pretty typical YA formula of girl meets hot jerk at school, falls in love, finds out he’s [x] supernatural being, etc.  Normally I would hate this with a passion.

And yet I don’t.

Katy may not know her mind like some of my favourite heroines, but she doesn’t take crap from anyone.  Not even Daemon Black.  When he at first tries to woo her she rejects him over and over because she remembered how he treated her like garbage for three months.  That sort of treatment just doesn’t go away overnight, no matter how many apologies are said.  Yet when Daemon actually starts to prove he’s really not a jerk you start to see Katy at war with herself as she becomes more attracted to this new Daemon while remembering how badly he treated her.

The thing that separates Onyx and the rest of the Lux series from most YA is that it’s well-written.  Dare I say that I literally laughed out loud because some parts were so funny?  (The people around me have now become inured to my book-laughter so I didn’t get the usual ‘crazy’ stares.)  At the same time, there were some very touching, serious scenes, especially toward the end of the novel.

I haven’t read a girl loves alien book yet so the premise is actually quite refreshing despite the overall formulaic approach.  Jennifer L. Armentrout’s alien race (the Lux) are truly fascinating and how the government treats them is disturbing.  And realistic.  I like how the full scope of Daemon’s power is revealed in slow increments rather than being thrown at us all at once.  The history of the Lux is also shown in greater detail in Onyx, especially concerning the Department of Defense’s relationship with them.

Is this the most unique book ever written?  Of course not.  However, Onyx is well-written, fast-paced, funny and touching at the same time.  The characters seem like your typical YA characters at first, but then Katy and Daemon acquire so much more depth.  They really grow throughout the books and I can’t wait to see what happens in Opal.

I give this book 4.5/5 stars.

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The Commander’s Desire by Jeanette Green

The Commander's Desire by Jeanette Green(Cover picture courtesy of Goodreads.)

Princess Elwytha wants revenge on the monster who murdered her brother. In a false exchange for peace, she offers herself in marriage to the enemy Prince. The plan? Kill the Prince’s battle-scarred Commander-the man who ended King Thor’s life with one filthy sword thrust through the back. To her horror, the Commander agrees to take Elwytha as his bride. Worse, the wedding date will be sooner than expected. Not all is lost, however. Now she has more opportunity to be alone with him-and exact justice. But the deed becomes difficult to carry out. Fighting her innate sense of honor, she begins to see the ironclad integrity of the man behind the scars. And with this knowledge comes doubt. Did he slay her brother? What exactly is the new king’s plan? Whom can she trust? Elwytha must decide well, for more than her life is at stake. Soon she must betray either allegiance to her kingdom-or the man who is quickly claiming her heart.

[Full disclosure: I received a free ebook through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.]

Even a week after reading The Commander’s Desire I’m still not really sure what to think of it.  There were good elements and bad elements, so I might as well start with the bad.

The thing I didn’t like was the historical ambiguity.  Sure, Jeanette Green set a time period for the thing but I really didn’t feel immersed in the period.  It seemed like your typical quasi-Medieval TV show, if I’m honest.  There were a few things that seemed true to the time period and almost made me feel like I was there, but Jeanette Green’s style of writing never really pulled me into the history and we sure didn’t get much background on the time.

I had so-so feelings about Elwytha and her relationship with the Commander.  Sometimes their relationship was believable with that sort of push-pull dynamic that would come from being natural enemies.  Sometimes their relationship bordered on ridiculous as Elwytha kept blowing her cover by threatening the Commander and giving him mixed signals.  At times she was ready to kill him and sometimes it was like she was totally in love.  I can understand the hot-cold feelings, but they were present far too often to make it believable or even for me to like Elwytha.  Sure, the reader was told over and over that Elwytha was a fierce warrior on a mission but I never really got that vibe from her.  She just seemed like a wannabe tough girl.

With all that said, I actually didn’t mind The Commander’s Desire.  If you leave out some of the more ridiculous aspects you’re left with a generally sweet romance (if a little predictable) and a reasonably paced plot.  The characters aren’t anything special, but they’re not horrible either.  Basically, this is a mediocre book written in a decent enough style that if it sounds interesting to you I say give it a go!  It won’t hurt.

I give this book 3/5 stars.

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